xHawix

THIS NEW WATTPAD READING THING IS CATCHING ME OFF GUARD.

christie98

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Hi hawi, am one of your readers and am among those who would like to see how the book ends of course that is we all wish for a happy ending for Zinniah and Apollo, buuuuuttt chapter 57 is just so tragic and unfair to Zinniah's case, imagine being physically tortured everyday for a month while expecting a baby then on top of that she is sexually abused like seriously I feel for the girl and please try to lessen her pain like for instance maybe Apollo to save her before Dominic takes advantage of her, if you put yourself in her shoes it's just too much for her, maybe try to eliminate the part that Dominic had his way with her or she is saved before being raped coz that's what it is, she will be scarred for the rest of her life, imagine that happening to a person who has been tortured for a month then all she is left with is her hallucinations which may lead to depression in the end and maybe losing her baby, all am saying is that I only wish and hope that Dominic does not succeed in taking advantage of her, of course that is according to me, the choice is all yours........and maybe Zinniah should also let Apollo suffer a little bit for her forgiveness because he is also  partly to blame for her kidnapping, if he had not behaved like an ass in the first place and listened to her version of the story coz she also didn't know that her father used her as collateral, anyway that's my opinion and it's all up to you on how the flow of the story will end as we wait for the updates of the next few chapters, that's all, lol