Ending reminds me of the battle of marathon
I don't want to be an author when I grow up. I want to be an author now.
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Capitalize "seems normal" and erase the sentence about Katniss (which isn't a flower, btw). If this is first person, make it obvious and don't switch between "you'd expect" and "I'd say" etc
Also, capitalize the on in Dotting On. And u should probably remove ur face as ur profile becuz anyone can see this
Also it's spelt referred
Edit it to fix the following grammar/spelling mistakes: Don't use the word basically there Spelled dystopian Spelled prologue Historic, not historian I'm a nerd lol