sweetjuxtaposition

I still have positive memories of Wattpad.. My first story in 2013. I still log in sometimes. I love you all

lalaworm

hello human
          since about a year ago, when you critiqued my poetry book, I have been getting better and better at it. I've also matured a bit.. if that helps any?
          I've taken all your points into consideration and believe you are one of the reasons I am getting better.
          I came here to say thank you and I see that you're not doing so fine. I'm really sorry to say i havent stayed in touch with you. If you are going thru things, know that it has to get worse before it gets better.
          Twenty One Pilots helps, if you don't listen to it already. 
          anyways, that's all ^^ i just realized you probably dont even remember me. Oh well. how much does it cost to be nice to someone, right? (:
          farewell~

lalaworm

Uw (:
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sweetjuxtaposition

 That's very sweet!! And ofc I remember you! I even remember my favorite poem of yours, the one about the pearl. This was very nice to see <33 and I do listen to Twenty One Pilots ^^ Ahh, really tysm, it means quite a bit
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itsprincessa2

are you okay? i just wanna make sure.. one point of this is my critique, but if you cant do it, totally okay, i understand, whatever your reason is. im checking in for that and also you seem to be inactive for a bit?? i hope youre okay...

itsprincessa2

its totally cool! I'm glad that you are still doing the critiques for everyone  <3 I'm sorry that other readers have been unkind to you, but trust that I will show nothing but respect to you! best wishes my dude~
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sweetjuxtaposition

@chrisxchambers I logged back in today just to finish critiques haha ^^ I kind of got overwhelmed because of some things some readers have been saying to me...
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itsprincessa2

Are you still doing critiquing? ♡ if so I will leave my form here, if not, just ignore and let me know ASAP. Thank you! 
          
          @TheFaeryKing
          
          Title: Polaroid Girl
          
          Genre: Short Story
          
          # of chapters: 10. You said your maximum was 9, but two of my chapters are very short (they take under 30 seconds to read, and you shouldn't even have to scroll.) So I wondered if you would still accept? Thank you!
          
          Focus on?: Sorry structure, plot, sentence arrangement, a little bit of grammar, characters and their development, overall story in general. 
          
          Delivery?: Whichever is more comfortable for you. If in the direct messages, you can be brutally honest, but in the comments, don't sugar coat, but be a little nicer please ♡ thank you so much! Lots of love~

itsprincessa2

@ThefaeryKing thank you so much for accepting! And I am in no hurry for a critique, but I can't wait to hear it! Thank you very very very much for accepting <3
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sweetjuxtaposition

@chrisxchambers Oh yeah, accepted. Reading and commenting on anything I make is no longer required as payment. I can't do your critique at this moment as I'm about to temporarily head out of the country without wifi. I'll get it done when I get back though.
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itsprincessa2

@chrisxchambers I have completed said payment! I couldn't find your book legacies so I chose your creepypasta fanfic and did the payment on there instead. Is that okay? Thank you lots xx
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sweetjuxtaposition

cosplaying for the first time in public this summer :0

sweetjuxtaposition

@vena67 In July, I'm cosplaying as Mira Naigus from Soul Eater and in November, I'm cosplaying as Canary from Hunter x Hunter
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vena67

@TheFaeryKing what are you cosplaying
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