summerreaderjunkie

How is everyone doing???????

Jessvk

Hi!! Could you please give me advice on my story, The King's Alpha Queen? I know I have a lot of mistakes to fix but it's a story that I am proud of. I'm proud of my characters  and the unique  story line I've so many times broke my head to create but I just can't understand why it doesn't appeal to readers. 
          Please and thank you!

abhyans

Hi
          
          Thanks for great collection of books. Could you take time to look at my book and comment
          
          Thanks

summerreaderjunkie

hey,
            
            thank you!! Your story description sounds appealing to me. I will definitely read your story. Also if I like it, I will feature it,,, if not then I will give you my honest opinion. Please do not take the criticism the wrong way, as I'm just being truthful.
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