smolphan

Working on a Joshleen fic for who ever is interested

Saffron123xx

Hi!! 
          Can I ask of a favour?
          I'm sorry if I sound really annoying but I just want some constructive criticism on my work "adopted by phan" because I'm not attracting many readers and I'd like some feedback to know what I'm doing wrong. 
          Don't be afraid to be harsh, I'd rather know the truth than carry on with bad writing. 
          Thanks, I'll make sure to return the favour somehow -Saffron123xx