skyelfree

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skyelfree

So..my first upload is called Yellow Brick Road. I was told that it seems like it's part of a longer piece. So...I have noticed a few things thus far: It needs a heck of a lot more back story. A change of her profession, change of ending, a bit more of grandmother, a lot more of her and Ty....ANY SUGGESTIONS, would be greatly appreciated. I really hope you like the story!