Umm..I dunno if it will help you or not, but I would like to recommend you to read "Broken bonds" in 'Fanfiction.net' (I forgot the writer's name)...it's one of the bestest gintama fic ever!!! ヽ(*≧ω≦)ノ
The situation's quite similar to your story "I will find you"(T▽T)
so if you've got free time on your hands then please try reading it, you may get some few ideas from it!!!!
please keep updating your stories!!! (´ε`*)
Hi I'm also a fan of OkiKagu and........ A Filipina!!!!! I never knew you are a filipino too!!!!! And I really love your stories!! Hope you make more!!!!
And merry christmas!!!!
hi im really sorry if you didnt understand my statement last time,what i meant is i read your story (sadistic love story and saving my sister)
but the last time you post a message at my wall before you post( you said you read my stories but.....) you recommend me to read your story intitled: (the truth) but when i looked at your works i didnt see i story intitled the truth. im really really really sorry.i'll try to find your story the truth.
@nicolekim10 wait! dont be sorry. my story that i recommend ( the thruth) i change the title of my story. my story now is "i will find you". what i mean is i change the title of the story. the title of my story now is "i will find you"