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okorulesoko
2 years ago
@colormecliche Anything I can do to help :D Thanks for looking over my story too, it means a lot :D
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Very VERY good, but some basic things to work on; first, the names jayden and hayden to me are to close. I got SOO confused when jayden was being...Awakening to Life
Hey :P This is super good, ngl, I really like it. Just for a little constructive criticism, there are some grammar issues but if you read through...
My Immortal Series - Serend...
Wow. I really like it. Like REALLY Few things to work on though. One, 3rd person is always hard to pull off just because of the...
Hearts in Philadelphia
@holayou94 Thanks Cassie :DDD Its my first attempt at short story ism lol. Im working on the 2nd chapter lol
Bruised
