ohaider

New Book, "Our Potential Beginning". Hope you guys will read it. :)

amazing_lonergirl98

Hi! I've just started writing my very first story, and I would really be glad if you could critique it for me? Please? Insult it, praise it, anything. I would really appreciate if you could gove your thoughts on my story :D So, it's title is "Ghosts of the Past". And I'm planning it to be a Romanc, Mystery, Family, and Life, actually. It's all about the results of Xavier's actions 10 years ago, and now, he is doubting whether or not he'd made the right choiches.
          
          So, here;s the link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/17984251-ghosts-of-the-past
          
          Thank you so much!! ;)