Status: I'm baaaack *cue horror music* -Fleur (11 months ago)
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| Member Since | Sep 24, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 35 |
lafleurdeverite and happylittleava's co-writing scheme, oh I mean story.
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 | The Advice Column7 parts / 4 pages, updated Oct 25, 2011 Willow has a trick up her sleeve that most girls don't- she's the school's advice columnist. But when work begins to interfere with new-found friendship and romance, thin... read more  1,356 reads  35  30 |
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alleyneangel
1 year ago
@lafleurdeverite im glad you like it :D
lafleurdeverite
1 year ago
@alleyneangel It's amazing!!!
alleyneangel
1 year ago
Thanks so much for fanning you guys :D it means a lot! hope you enjoy ur trailer! ~Janice <3
mobilestone
1 year ago
@jjlove12 you can have mine if you want. :) -Fleur
mobilestone
1 year ago
@jjlove12 Eh no sorry.
jjlove12
1 year ago
can you give me your email so i can send it to you???
mobilestone
1 year ago
Yeah sure@jjlove12 --Ava
jjlove12
1 year ago
Hey i made you a cover do ya still need one?
DeepestLove
1 year ago
Sorry for the multiple msgs. My iPod is kinda jacked up. And if you aren't Irish, there are many places you can brush up on your slang!
DeepestLove
1 year ago
So I checked out your story! It was really good, but the ONE thing you need is to convince me that.... Uhhhhhh.... Whatshername is Irish. I may be Italian but I was born in America and in order for it to be believable you'd need to incorporate a lot of compounds, Irish slang, an probably a litte bit of Gaelic. Oh! And as you saw above, make the two characters distinguishable from one another. The only time I realized the character change is when I saw their names. I felt like they had one personality. It's a lot for me to be able to say for three chapters, but I have a sense for these things. Otherwise, it was amazing! Keep writing, -Rachel
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