Status: "Stories of love and death and cold and heat and ice and flame." Intro to Shelf Life. Perfect description of the first book in my series (5 months ago)

mailmi

Location	Somewhere over the rainbow
Member Since	Jul 21, 2012
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Hello people of the world. You have fortunately stumbled upon my page. If you would be so kind, check out my stories in the "Works" section, right now it's just Alphabet Soup, but more will come.

Speaking of more, I'm working on a five book series with my editor,@sweditor, you should really check him out. He's awesome. If you want to know about the series, too bad. It's a secret. But, it has something to do with my profile pic... hmmm.....

Him and I have started a critiquing forum, and we would like you to check it out! It's called Chapter 1 Critiquing: One every day (revised rules!) Here's the link so you don't have to search for it: http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/319899/Chapter+1+Critiquing:+1+every+day+(revised+rules!) 

If you have any questions, feel free to ask. Happy reading!

-mailmi

Works

Alphabet Soup

3 pages, updated Jul 21, 2012

A B C D E... or F? Erwin has to stop the Alphabet Murderer before he gets to any more letters, or else...

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mailmi
4 months ago

Of course you can have it. You're in column ED.

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ArANSGC4bAPAdGNVQkc1NmZkQzMxWE9KS1pkQ05rOWc

And, well, with the Characterization, yes, I don't want you to tell me everything about her. But I want a little, maybe even a lot more than you're giving me right now. And find ways to fit in details, so you don't have to just say "She looked slim with blue eyes and blonde hair." Say something like "He slipped the necklace onto her slim neck."

mailmi
5 months ago

Just post on our forum! To get an A+, you have to have very good quality writing in one or more of the categories on our critique. The link to the critiquing forum is http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/319899/Chapter+1+Critiquing:+1+every+day+(revised+rules!),

Cloud_dancer
5 months ago

Hey! What do I have to do to get an A+? Saw your piece in the clubs but couldn't find the link. It's finals time for me so I'd love to see if I'm passing ;) my story is:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/313075-the-unknowables

mailmi
6 months ago

Hey everyone, if you're bored and waiting for your critique (or just bored) you should check out my short story Alphabet Soup.
Happy reading!

TheyCallMeIgnot...
6 months ago

Here is my link: 

http://www.wattpad.com/story/2447423-roma-lycanthropa

mailmi
8 months ago

Hey fans, if you're kinda bored, you should check out my short story (which I'm going to turn into a novel for NaNoWriMo) Alphabet Soup. It's my only story on here so far. Happy Reading!

mailmi
9 months ago

I really did like the first chapter. (The first A++ I've ever given.) Here's the link to the google doc. 
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/ccc?key=0ArANSGC4bAPAdGNVQkc1NmZkQzMxWE9KS1pkQ05rOWc

ChristianSzczep...
9 months ago

Hey! Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you liked it! I was wondering if I could get the full review though. That'd be awesome. =D

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