luvaddict

@Emmiie Hi, could you please read my story and tell if I've made any errors?
          	
          	This is my First story (well the summary of it atleast) I've posted on here and I need some critical advice.....

luvaddict

@Emmiie Thanks so much Ill keep this in mind because I have a feeling I'll be needing tons of help.
          
          Seeing as I'm like one of those reelly confused types that mix up even the simplest directions! (not kidding, it's one of the reasons as to why I failed some of my most recent tests!)