Liza

I read your book "once upon time", its excellent. 

@hana177  I understand what you mean. I did think about ending it differently, but ultimately decided to give them a happy ending. It really wasn't John's fault he acted the way he did. He was a victim too and they did love each other. That was a very hard story to write. I had to edit out portions because of the PG13 rating here. The full version is more angsty and painful, IMO. Thanks so much for reading!

I really like your story "Tomorrow"! I read it a year ago and read it again a coupe of months ago. It is really well written and thought through. The only thing I had to nibble on was the ending - even though I understand it and it makes sense for a happy ending. BUT: I really felt sorry for Margeret and I found she deserved ... more. Like in the movie "The vow" the one being forgotten can't even get angry, because there just is no wronged party - it is as it is. I personally would have liked it better if Margaret had really TRIED to move on.
          But again: apart from my very subjective view of the ending as a reader - I really liked it and enjoyed your writing style! 

I have self published my second story 'More Than Words' on Amazon. This was originally titled 'Once Upon a Time'
          
          Though this story was inspired in part by the characters from North & South, it is not a retelling of the story. This is a modern day fairy-tale with magical elements. 

@whatcatydidnext Thank you for the spreading the news!

You go girl! I'll spread the word to my Amazon reading mates.
          x

I've self published my story 'The Whistle Echoes' on Amazon. This was a story I wrote years ago. It is a sequel to Elizabeth Gaskell's novel, 'North and South', picking up where the book left off.
          
          Below are the links to the Amazon listings.
          
          The Whistle Echoes – Printed Copy
          http://www.amazon.com/The-Whistle-Echoes....north+and+south
          
          The Whistle Echoes – Kindle Version
          http://www.amazon.com/The-Whistle-Echoes....w histle+echoes

Thanks for adding Terrors to your reading list...hope you enjoy :)

I am stunned! 
          
          Thank you everyone who voted for my story! 
          
          And Thank you, Richard, for being so delicious I was inspired to write a story about your character. LOL!

It's strange ... I voted for RA as John in Tomorrow for the first time.  When I went back, it changed to Once Upon a Time and I needed to vote again.  Never mind.  IT's RA and I love him in both stories.  :-P