joelle3831

Listen my honest advice is to go back to elementary school, because you write stories like an uneducated peasant. I would write more, but I honestly can't understand what you're trying to say. Which isn't really a bad thing, considering I don't really care. @ReicheruJai 

ReicheruJai

dude wat do you know about writing wats it's it to u wat am writing if your dont like it dont read not STOP POSTING YOUR NEGATIVITY ON MY STORY what right do you have to tell me wat is the right and wrong yr not my teacher or wat ever your life must be BORING DULL AND UNINTERESTING IF U HAVE SO MUCH TIME TO WASTE HATIN ON MY STORY u no wat why don't u stop writing or coming on wattpad if all u have to say is negative if u dont like it don't read no one asked u to stop dissing others people's work and improve your OWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!