Thanks for the sweet comments you guys!
While I am a big Twilight fan, it frustrated me that Bella took Edward back so easily after their return from Italy. In my mind, he treated her with complete disregard in his decision to leave (even though he did it for her), and it would have been nice to see some emotion...anger...doubt...something...from her. I also wanted Bella to give her relationship with Jacob a chance (even if it was only a little one!), but I discovered while writing this that Stephenie Meyer was right: there is no other way this story could have ended, as heartbreaking as it was for Jacob at this point.
I think writing it from Edwards POV is a great idea! I'll do that soon!
Merry Christmas!
