Namuun0914

Hi there I just wanted to let you know that your Detective Conan story is really good and I enjoy reading it 
          Keep up the good work and best of luck to you and your story 
          You know there isn’t a decent story about it and there’s only a few good stories out there. 
          Some discontinued or forgotten but a few continues 
          I hope that your story continues as well and update it at your own pace 
          But I really do what to know what happens in the next chapter 
          But like I said update it at your own pace 
          Till then see you soon and good luck

Namuun0914

That’s no problem 
            I’m happy to help
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ikutr979

@Namuun0914  (Apologies for the long reply, I got really carried away....Who the hell writes 6 paragraphs!?!?!?) 
            
            Thank you so much!! I really appreciate how you reached out to tell me how much you liked my work---it means a lot to me! 
            I kind of just started the Detective Conan fanfic because I had a bunch of time on my hands, and just wanted to do it for fun. Then I just posted the story here because I wanted to see the reactions. (It's too embarrassing for friends or family.)
            
            Now, my random update schedule! I just post the chapter whenever I finish writing it. That could be within days, or maybe even months. I don't really have a set time to publish. A new chapter should be coming soon, though! (Or later) I'm working on it. 
            
            Now that you mention it, I do think having a prologue is a good idea. The beginning of the fanfic keeps giving me iffy vibes, and I haven't been able to get it off my mind. I will definitely type up something similar to what you suggested. 
            
            Btw, I do think I tried to mention that she found out she was in Detective Conan when she met Gin (the very first chapter), but looking back, I guess I made it really confusing . "Oh, is that Gin?? They must've gotten Shinichi already!!" 
            The 'me' back then did not know how to write, I'm terribly sorry!! Please excuse my brain. I'll have to fix that later. (The chapter, not my brain)
            
            Eiko's backstory is supposed to show up later in the future, so I can't use any of that info, but I can show a glimpse of her first life. Like what she did at her occupation, and how she dies. But I can't tell too you much right now! It has to be a SURPRISE.
            
            Anyways, thank you once again for the feedback! I will definitely write that prologue, and fix that first chapter!
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Namuun0914

Oh and I think you should write a prologue instead of jumping straight into the story 
            And how she grew up like time skips and how did she know she was in her favorite anime show
            Like that sort of stuff 
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