highhopes07

My plot:
          	The mission I had been given was simple and basic, it should have been the same as every other I was assigned with. It was to bring my boss' daughter home safe and sound, however to express no emotions and not allow feelings to be involved. In all honestly, there was none of this, however something different. It was a hard thump, burning with fire, and it stuck my chest and sent agony shuddering through my body; a constant ache I could not shake. The pain was instant, as soon as I laid eyes upon her and climbed that damned door. My barrier had so easily been shattered..

alyse5363

@highhopes07  This sounds pretty good!  I know I'd enjoy reading it, especially if you show both perspectives
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highhopes07

My plot:
          The mission I had been given was simple and basic, it should have been the same as every other I was assigned with. It was to bring my boss' daughter home safe and sound, however to express no emotions and not allow feelings to be involved. In all honestly, there was none of this, however something different. It was a hard thump, burning with fire, and it stuck my chest and sent agony shuddering through my body; a constant ache I could not shake. The pain was instant, as soon as I laid eyes upon her and climbed that damned door. My barrier had so easily been shattered..

alyse5363

@highhopes07  This sounds pretty good!  I know I'd enjoy reading it, especially if you show both perspectives
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THIS IS GOOD
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