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I like your books so far but it would be better if you add more details and edit your chapters before you upload them because you have potential 

update rejected with the alphas baby soon please

u may be young but u got talent keep going on use ur gift

@jodioakley lol thanks, writing is my passion though so I won't ever give up...hopefully....

@jodioakley Yup I totally agree, I wrote that when I was ten and then eleven, and I absolutely suckedddd! That's why I made a new page with more proficient writing, so I get it.

I would just like to say that your stories have potential but they are really disjointed. There's no real cohesiveness and you can't tell what's going on, who the main characters are, and what kind of time frame you're using.

@rex4bags you guys are soooo nice!

@Live__Life__Young I agree with u!! I am attached!!!!!

@unleashed27 thank you, you made my week. :)

I just wanted to say that I have read your stories and you are good. Yes you might not be greatest yet and I say yet because writing doesn't just happen over night. I have been developing my skills for the past eleven years and I'm still growing. So just keep writing and you will only grow better : )