keepsmilingbts
Hey Empire is a cool book. The concept seems nice and I'm really sorry, I didn't mean to offend you but since you said you want to write your own book one day, I thought I should contribute a bit if I could even by a bit, your language is nice except for some grammatical errors and few missing punctuation Marks it's an enjoyable read.
Sorry again if I was too harsh
explore24
@keepsmilingbts just send me a message. And I will fix things up. Also is it okay if I was to send you a draft of it first before I post it.