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Death and Dinah

Death and Dinah

5 parts / 7 pages, updated May 07, 2012GPictures
The doctor, Doctor Hartman, was really nice. She had wispy strands of curly hair and sea green eyes. She put me through a big white tunnel. She said she had to look at my ... read more
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