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dolly_98

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Kaylewood Academy (girlxgirl)

Kaylewood Academy (girlxgirl)

2 pages, updated Apr 16, 2013PG-13
(GirlxGirl) (Supernatural creatures, mostly vampires) When a schizophrenic witch called Jane Plath is enrolled into Kaylewood Academy she begins to question a ... read more
28 reads votes 1 comments 0
Dramate Ploras (Poetry by Caitlin Grey)

Dramate Ploras (Poetry by Caitlin Grey)

6 parts / 1 page, updated Apr 13, 2013G
65 reads votes 5 comments 5
Letters From Warsley Asylum

Letters From Warsley Asylum

1 page, updated Jan 18, 2013PG-13Completed
TRIGGER WARNING: Contains suicide, implied depression, implied abuse and implied self-harm. This is a short story which is a 'letter' written within the confining walls of "Warsley Asylum"
39 reads votes 7 comments 17
Designed I

Designed I

8 parts / 4 pages, updated Jul 24, 2012PG-13Video
We live in a strange world. What happens when it turns dark is a mystery because we hide from the creatures the lurk among it. When a ruthless company realises we've been hidin... read more
74 reads votes 3 comments 6
White Roses

White Roses

3 pages, updated Jul 16, 2012PG-13
53 reads votes 3 comments 3
No Man's Wonderland

No Man's Wonderland

1 page, updated Jun 08, 2012
A ww1 epic that takes on the epic fairytale 'Alice in Wonderland'. Addice Fiddell sneaks over to Russia in order to join the Battalion of Death. Once in the actual w... read more
9 reads votes 0 comments 0
Death and Dinah

Death and Dinah

5 parts / 7 pages, updated May 07, 2012GPictures
The doctor, Doctor Hartman, was really nice. She had wispy strands of curly hair and sea green eyes. She put me through a big white tunnel. She said she had to look at my ... read more
343 reads votes 30 comments 22
We Are Clones

We Are Clones

1 page, updated May 04, 2012PG-13
23 reads votes 1 comments 0
Welcome to Crazy Town

Welcome to Crazy Town

2 parts / 4 pages, updated May 01, 2012PG-13Video
155 reads votes 14 comments 8
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CelticRose
CelticRose

1 month ago
@dolly_98 it's been taken down - - now the SYS threads are pinned to the top of each club. You advertise once in there and the threads get emptied once a week... it's meant to encourage people to advertise more subtly and building relationships with each other as writers rather than vote-trading etc!@xxmajaine has a great book on her profile that helps with this! :) 
dolly_98
dolly_98

1 month ago
Does anyone know if the share your story forum has been taken down or if you can get banned from a forum? If you are banned is is temporary or permanent?
uaidhi
uaidhi

1 month ago
@dolly_98 Oh I see, some are quite good :)
dolly_98
dolly_98

1 month ago
@uaidhi Usually I use google images and use pixlr express or editor if I need to photo shop images together. On Dramate Ploras  I used sumopaint because I wanted a simple cover.
uaidhi
uaidhi

1 month ago
Your covers are nice, where do or how do you get them?
dolly_98
dolly_98

2 months ago
If you read "The Trapped Soul" and are wondering where all the chapters are then I'll explain now. I'm getting rid of chapters which aren't well written as well as chapters which are screwing up the flow of the book general. Only one will be added back in and it will be added back in on a much later time. 
dolly_98
dolly_98

2 months ago
@0oShakeItUp0o I know, I cannot wait until the DVD comes out I've been fixated on the entire issue since the episode came out
0oShakeItUp0o
0oShakeItUp0o

2 months ago
@dolly_98 I know! And it ended on such an open line! But I heard that in the DVD it has an extra clip that let's you know whether the new human reality is real or not! April cannot come fast enough! 
dolly_98
dolly_98

2 months ago
@0oShakeItUp0o I'm still in a state of denial that it's over, it's too hard to bear,
0oShakeItUp0o
0oShakeItUp0o

2 months ago
@dolly_98 I LOVE Being Human. Still clawing through the grief that it won't be on any more! :(. Oh God I bet he was really nice. Thanks for fanning back! :)

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@uaidhi yeah it's an allegory/metaphor. I'm glad you spotted it.
Dramate Ploras (Poetry by C...

Okay so you really need to work on showing not telling. Try your best to never say what a character is feeling, do it through dialogue, tone of...
Dust

I found this a little bit confusing since I had realised the warden was female so you should probably make that more obvious. Also the pacing...
Forgetting The Color Red

@BleedingInk Oh, the motto is revealed, it's "We take any case"
Letters From Warsley Asylum

Okay, so I found this quite boring. The book moves at a very slow pace and overly describes everything, including things which are common sense....
A Knights Realm: Forsaken Rise