dance2urownmusic

Hey everyone!! A short chapter of "The Weirds" has just been posted.It's sort of a short transition one. I you have any suggestions on how to make it more substantial, i'd love to hearit!

BurntToast_

@dance2urownmusic Oh! I kinda forgot about that one! I don't like it much, I might add more, I wrote in one night, kinda like I need to get this out of my head kinda thing. xD I think I know where I want to head with that, but I'm not sure...Aww really?!?! That's so cool you think that!! I'm planning on updating that one, but I have been saying that for months! haha =)  Haha I like Gryffindor! 

dance2urownmusic

@OnceAUponAGalaxy so i read your short story and it was really good!! One thing that you might want to do is give the characters more depth and let them grow throughout the story. It was short, so you probably could not have changed much but it's a suggestion! And i really like how your characters interact with eachother :) hope it helped! :3 oh and what house are you in?