carsonwcraig

Thanks Reynoldjay for the critique. I'm still editing, but the more feedback I get, the better I can improve the story. 
          	
          	I really like the artwork for your Children's Fantasy Book. Keep me posted.

Reynoldjay

You are off to a great start with your writing. I like your concept that sounds well thought out. This piece of writing isn't completely polished like a professional, however that means little in this day and age. In that "50 shades of gray" is a horrible piece of writing, it sold millions and you are way beyond what passes for writing with that book. I'm getting into Children's Fantasy with illustrations and should have something out soon from the Wurtherington Diary. 
          http://fineartamerica.com/profiles/reynold-jay.html?tab=artwork 
          See some art that is taking shape from the upcoming series. Thanks for following me. I'll keep in touch.