@messed_up_soul hi im sorry to hear about that. many people have different opinions about my stories and i am open to criticisms. i wrote this book satisfying the boss when i was younger so it may have flaws. definitely, i am not the best writer but i will reflect if my writing is not good enough. i will review and rewrite a new book if i have time but currently i really have no time so i will appreciate if you give me some time. thank you for your past support and for reading my books, i really appreciate it. thank you for this criticism and giving me a chance to learn.