The Casualty got a huge rehaul (still working on it, but the main stuff is done) - typos, grammar & stylistic mistakes hopefully eradicated; I polished not just language, but the plot as well, added more volume, more meaning, rounded everything up better.
I might even have gotten a link to my story to Casey Biggs himself - but if he chooses to read it, that's a big question :D. If he does, I really hope he reaches out with some feedback - who else than "Damar" himself to judge the story, right? ^^
In the meantime, please enjoy the pleasant changes and stay tuned for extra chapters - once I finish polishing the main story, I already have a pile of ideas for what to write next! ;)