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If you are not aware I have deleted Bolt from the Black. Don't worry though it will come back. I am just taking it off for now because it got way off from what I want it to be, so I am going to change a lot and post it when I know for sure that everything will happen as I want it to. Stay tuned for when it comes back :) also I am going to post more of A Pirate's Life for Me here soon and I'm really excited to see what you think of it. Thank you all for following me and check back soon for more updates.
          
          P.S. I know I haven't been faithful in updating my stories a lot has happened but I am just about to graduate High School so I will have more time to focus on writing from now on.

Hello :D You asked for a rating for Chapter 1 of Bolt From the Black
          
          8.9/10
          
          Hope I helped :) Thanks for requesting and good luck 

Ohmy. We both love anime! I'm fanning you. :D

I posted chapter 11 Strange Sensations!!! I loved writing this chapter and the story is about to become very action filled as things start happening between the Dallomires, Demons, and her!!!

thank you so much for your help i finnaly got chapter one of my book up feel free to cheak it out

okay thanks :)

@luckychaarm if you think that you are giving too much away just end the dialogue before it does give anything away. Also I've noticed as I write I think I give a bunch of stuff away but it is because we know what we are leading too and when really it just leaves the readers with questions.

i have alot of trouble with the diologe and like saying what shes doing ithink i give to much info somtimes idk

@VesperLavinia thank you so much! :)

@luckychaarm I just read your about me and well a way to start a book is just to write down a list of characters that is going to be in the book and think of ways of how you want to introduce them. Another thing that I do is just write down a bunch of stuff that will happen in the story and put in details later. Hopefully this can help you get started :)