Sunfire235

Hi, I was wondering if you could take a look at some of my work. It'd mean a lot.

Hello everybody! Sorry I haven't been on in so long, life has been insane! I started a new story recently (genre is teen fiction) and I would love to get your feedback! Here is the link:
          
           http://www.wattpad.com/story/5874083-the-struggle-of-the-underdogs
          
          Please don't be afraid to point out any errors you find, I need a lot of constructive criticism! If you guys read what I've written so far, I hope you like it! :D

@nightwish435 Haha no problem ^-^

@BFluff Great to see you again! :D and thanks a bunch ^_^

@Kurimoko_Yumitashi meh :P I would be an InuKag fan, but Kagome can be so annoying sometimes!

INUKAG :3

We meet again, yoooou! Haha though not on Noni's account. Great work! ^^

@LanaRamirez you're welcome! :D

@NightShade_Epiphany I LOVE KIKYO SO MUCH!! :D

Inuyahsa, yes <3 :)