StoriesByPerson

"Our Broken Pieces" is now back up with some minor story changes and HOPEFULLY better spelling and grammar. 
          	
          	I will be taking down Destiny Part 2 and doing the same thing to it for the same reason. It will be back up as soon as possible for y'all to enjoy.

Sunshine01178

Oh, and also I have written my own SnowBarry story in movie script form that I'm still working on, but would love your help in making what I have so far better. I love all of your stories and think you are such a good writer. So pretty, please help me make my SnowBarry story better and please help me on what happens next in the story from where I left off.
          	  Link to my SnowBarry movie script story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iYgJhnVZsu-pG2x4ATVBFE9XR-OTS8ko2JDZwYUzuZI/edit?usp=sharing
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Sunshine01178

@StoriesByPerson I can't wait to read Destiny Part 2 to find out what happens next. Baby Henry is alive and the God of speed has him. OMG, NOT GOOD!!! How is Henry's life going to turn out after being raised by an evil person?
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Stream2680

@StoriesByPerson is Destiny Part 2 up?
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StoriesByPerson

"Our Broken Pieces" is now back up with some minor story changes and HOPEFULLY better spelling and grammar. 
          
          I will be taking down Destiny Part 2 and doing the same thing to it for the same reason. It will be back up as soon as possible for y'all to enjoy.

Sunshine01178

Oh, and also I have written my own SnowBarry story in movie script form that I'm still working on, but would love your help in making what I have so far better. I love all of your stories and think you are such a good writer. So pretty, please help me make my SnowBarry story better and please help me on what happens next in the story from where I left off.
            Link to my SnowBarry movie script story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iYgJhnVZsu-pG2x4ATVBFE9XR-OTS8ko2JDZwYUzuZI/edit?usp=sharing
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Sunshine01178

@StoriesByPerson I can't wait to read Destiny Part 2 to find out what happens next. Baby Henry is alive and the God of speed has him. OMG, NOT GOOD!!! How is Henry's life going to turn out after being raised by an evil person?
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Stream2680

@StoriesByPerson is Destiny Part 2 up?
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StoriesByPerson

Hey Y'all! Hope y'all r well. You may have noticed I've unpublished my story "Our Broken Pieces." 
          
          When this whole quarantine thing started I thought I would finally have more time to finish this and my other stories. Unfortunately, I was really hit with a bunch of Work from Home tasks and assignments and was just as busy, if not even more. But I still wanted to deliver content. Although, what ultimately happened was that my notes and wires got all crossed and we all know what happens when a show rushes their stories and it gets all messy... (cough* cough* season 4 of Flash) Seriously, Savitar's explanation was real messy, Killer Frost's characterization does not match at all with what they have now, an interesting character like Julian is introduced and thrown off the show (seen before with numerous Arrowverse characters), and we see the Accelerated Man for like a second and never again?! Even the writers admitted they were rushing it and screwing up. But this is getting away from my point.
          
          Anyways, I wasn't happy with how the latter half of "Our Broken Pieces" has turned out since I have been rushing it and tbh... i may or may have not lost my notes and story board on it  oops. But hopefully it will be back out for all of you to enjoy, with less grammar mistakes (no promises on that). 
          
          You may also notice me making changes to some of my chapters in "Destiny part 2" or "Dangerous Love" too, for the same reason. 
          
          
          Thanks y'all, stay safe! 

xwf1000

@StoriesByPerson Not sure what your day job is but eh whatever. Anyways glad you made a decision on that story consider my last rant of you making a decision to have Caitlin DEAD. Still bitter about it but on a side note, Watched tonight's episode of the Flash & was not a fan of it. Caitlin is still hurt after the attack by Sunshine that was couple of episodes ago?!!! WTF?!! I'd can understand her being Pregnant & all but that was SAD to watch & made her character WEAK IMO & even thought Mirror Iris is now dead SPOILER but GOOD RIDDENCE! Next 2 episodes should be interesting & hope to see who Godspeed is this time around. Anyways hope it's back up & this time no Caitlin death please. Thank you.
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