Steven Universe Gal

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          Would you like to read my lapidot? 

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Your pods fanfiction was very rushed, and you spelled a lot of on the Stephen universe fanfiction was very good but still there are some adjustments that you need to make like maybe spellchecking or looking at the actual names of some of the characters. although this is constructive criticism your fanfiction made me cringe I think that if you could've taken more time to develop the storyline and maybe set out maybe like a script or something it could've been a great fan section but you rushed it and it did not turn out good the ending was very very bland  and I think that if you had  taken more time to develop things it would've been better but overall it was still a good story

Would u wanna hi on my kik group I'm staring about SU? Let m know.

This is a Oneshot book I made about Steven Universe and Adventure Time. The books don't crossover, though. I would really like your opinion on it. http://my.w.tt/UiNb/HY7K9Wt5Pv

Hey I love your fanfic and I'm working on a story right now about a coal gem and I think you could be interested. Nice work man

Agreed lol to your description. SU is life!

hello @SUFanGal

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