Clicksnclucks

hi roarka. im a very beginner writer, would you mind checking out my story and telling me tips to improve?
          I found out about you from flyingtothehorizon's story the roaring adventures of Pumpkin the lion and I am flyingtothehorizons brother.
          
          I hope you willl check my story out!

Clicksnclucks

@roarka thanks and i hope you will enjoy it. and my bad, i have wrote brother im his sister! 
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Roarka

@SilverrNightt Hello, flyingonthehorizon's brother. xD Okay, I'll make sure to check it out when I get home, though that'll be much later today.
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fatpigeon

Roarka

@fatpigeon Oh, hahah. :]
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fatpigeon

@Roarka OK. British politeness. They beat it into us. :)
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Roarka

@fatpigeon No problem, FP. There is no need to thank for every single thing like this, though. :]
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fatpigeon

Many thanks for your support, @Roarka. I hope you enjoy my work and please check the writers in my flock that are striving to improve themselves.
          
          Here's a list of writing tips and topics (click link & scroll down to comment 67 & 68): http://www.wattpad.com/forums/discussion/comment/16772333/ should you need help with improving your writing skills.
          If you only want to read, don't be afraid to comment or ask questions about the work.
          All the best
          FP

Roarka

@fatpigeon No problem. I'll surely check it out.
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Young_King_Kunta

I love the profile pic of baby shukaku

Roarka

@MorgenUnimuke sadly, no, I found it randomly on google
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