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Random_Logic

Name Mandy Lessick
Location Wonderful Indiana
Birthday Mar 01
Member Since Apr 01, 2011
Votes Received 574
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Well howdy! :3 
Most people aren't going to take time to read this little blurb about my boring life, but here goes:

✽ I'm Mandy! I'm 16, and I can drive legally now...with a parent... But yes, I'm excited! :D

✽ I'm a soft-spoken person, very insecure, and shy around new people. It can take a while before I open up to you, but when I do, I probably won't shut up. :3

✽ I really really really like British television. Being Human, Doctor Who, you name it. :D 

✽ I have a boyfriend, and we've been together for a while now. <3 He's the reason I'm hooked on The Walking Dead. That freakishly cute dork!(;

✽ I am a band geek to the max! I play trombone. Sexy, right? ;D Plus, I'm slowly learning electric violin. Whuddup!(;

✽ Music. Is. Awesome. I can't go anywhere without my music. Marina and the Diamonds!!!!<3<3<3 I also really like electric violin (weird, right?), rock, alternative, and good old 80s jams. A wide variety, and basically anything BUT pop, rap, and country. XD

✽ I'm all around nerdy. Really, I can't deny it. :3 I like Lord of The Rings, Star Wars, Tron, and all that fun stuff! :D

✽ I like writing about real world problems. I think it's important that people realize these things are going on and start to try to make an effort to put an end to it. 

✽ I REEAAALLLYY like Dr. Pepper. But anytime I drink it, I get a mad case of the hiccups. It's awful, but so funny. XD

I'm sorta lame, but if you wanna chat, hit me up! I'm always here if you need to talk! Just message me and I'll be willing to listen. <3 (:

Ciao,
Mandy (:

Works

Poet's Corner

Poet's Corner

5 parts / 1 page, updated Oct 25, 2012G
A collection of poem's I write in my free time. **Note: It probably won't be updated often.**
265 reads votes 46 comments 31
Blissful Chaos

Blissful Chaos

3 parts / 4 pages, updated Oct 25, 2012PG-13
"It was three days after I had been released from the hospital when the first scratch appeared. I'd love to lie and say I hit against something and scratched myself, b... read more
283 reads votes 42 comments 48
Epidemic

Epidemic

4 parts / 5 pages, updated Jul 23, 2012PG-13
With the zombie apocalypse on the rise, Lia finds herself fighting for her life after her family's death. Joined by her best friend, Cole, and her neighbor's daughter, Morgan, they fight the living dead, with one ultimate goal: Survive.
688 reads votes 117 comments 164
Weeping Willow

Weeping Willow

12 parts / 15 pages, updated May 23, 2012R
After getting drugged and kidnapped at a party one night, 16 year old Willow finds herself locked in Mitchel's basement, where she is used as Mitchel's toy. No one knows abo... read more
13,798 reads votes 241 comments 212
A Cut Above the Rest

A Cut Above the Rest

5 parts / 7 pages, updated Feb 07, 2012PG-13Video
Ellie is forced into a dangerous habit because of her parents' drinking habits; she's a cutter. When they finally push her over the edge she moves to New York with her... read more
5,578 reads votes 128 comments 64

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Lollipopfop
Lollipopfop

1 month ago
@Random_Logic Your logic really is random. I know what your opinion is of my comments. But its just your opinion, and based on immaturity. I did not use any bad language, and did not make any personal attacks. I spoke about the writing, not the writer. I was polite. Your attacks on me are not polite.
I never made any judgement of your intelligence, just your maturity level. I can judge someones maturity based on their comment. I never said I was a perfect writer. That doesn't change the fact that other people write very badly. You need to start working on talking about writing, not about people. Please don't respond. 
Random_Logic
Random_Logic

1 month ago
@Lollipopfop 
Hi, I had almost completely forgotten about you. Haha. 
First off, I would like to say that I am not too young to understand manners. You have no right to judge my intelligence based on my age. I get that manners sometimes involve saying things that are not necessarily complimentary. I get that completely. If something has to be said, then let it be said. But at the same time, you don't have to be as rude as you are about it. 
Whether you mean to or not, you are coming off as very rude. I understand that you're giving criticism, I get that. But I haven't seen many stories where you have something pleasant to say. 
I know my writing isn't perfect. I'm not a published, professional author. I appreciate any feedback I get, positive or negative. But the feedback you gave me was not even about my writing ability, but instead seemed only to have the purpose of cutting down my story and my characters. 
Are you a perfect writer? No. DO you make mistakes? Yes. Everyone does. And I'm sure you get criticism on your works sometimes too. But there is a difference between criticism and coming off as rude. And unfortunately, you come off as very rude.
Now I'm not sure how old you are, or how long you've been writing, but you need to learn that nobody in the writing industry is perfect. In fact, I noticed a few grammatical errors in your post to me. I've read published books and found typos! 
Basically, criticism is good. But coming off as rude and offensive is not. And it's not just me being sensitive.
Try working on how you word and say things.

Thanks,
Mandy
Lollipopfop
Lollipopfop

1 month ago
I do have nice things to say to the few people who make a decent attempt at writing. But I say what I think needs to be said. I don't use coarse language, and I never say anything I don't mean. If people do not like honest constructive criticism, they should not show their work in public. You are far too young to understand that manners does not mean saying nice things that are simply not true. Lying is never good manners, and saying something nice about some of the  writing atrocity you see around here would be sinful. I don't like to be unkind. If I said something mean its because I really, really thought it. If you have something to say about my writing, thats fine. But calling me out for an honest opinion is not.
Random_Logic
Random_Logic

2 months ago
@zazenpoet Thank you! (:
zazenpoet
zazenpoet

2 months ago
Happy BIrthday!! 
Random_Logic
Random_Logic

3 months ago
@Call_Me_Chaos That's good(:
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Call_Me_Chaos

3 months ago
@Random_Logic I'm good and no problem (:
Random_Logic
Random_Logic

3 months ago
<3 Happy Valentine's Day, everyone! <3 
Random_Logic
Random_Logic

3 months ago
@Call_Me_Chaos I'm pretty good (: How are you?
Call_Me_Chaos
Call_Me_Chaos

3 months ago
@Random_Logic How are youuu

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