Status: Valley has now surpased vamps in reads, thanks to all that made that possible. Valley #26 in both catergories. (1 year ago)

PracticeMakesperfect

Name Practice Makesperfect
Location Chicago, Illinois
Member Since Feb 21, 2012
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V.A.M.P.s "the Father" is my first attempt at writing a novel, I like writing novels so far.

The updates will come slow on Valley of Death as I work to finish V.A.M.P.s.

If ya know of anything good sci-fi wise to read, let me know about.


Valley made,  #21 Thriller, #26 Mystery/Suspense, Orphan #177 Fantasy

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Orphan

Orphan

2 parts / 1 page, updated Aug 23, 2012G
57 reads votes 4 comments 1
Valley of Death

Valley of Death

4 parts / 6 pages, updated Apr 03, 2012PG-13
The town of Praise Valley is like most close-knit, secluded, small towns. A feverish gossip spreads like wildfire with news of the return of their prodigal son Tom Harper ... read more
788 reads votes 10 comments 10
V.A.M.P.s

V.A.M.P.s

12 parts / 18 pages, updated Mar 23, 2012R
In the far future the average life of a human is insignificant. Matthew's world comes crashing down around him. Will he find meaning or will he be just another insignificant?
578 reads votes 28 comments 32
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RichardStaschy
RichardStaschy

10 months ago
You need to repost vamps as a PG-13 story. Watty doesnt support rated R stories. (this is the reason why I reposted most of my R rated stories.
@HomeInMyHeart 

Thank you for the heads up. If I notice soemthing hard to understand I'll take a look at the prolouge before I ask you about it.
@HomeInMyHeart 

Your welcome. I've only read the first chapter so far, but it seems really good. I skipped the prolouge cause I don't like to know a lot of backstory.

I'll read chapter 2 tommorrow.
@RichardStaschy 

Good idea.
RichardStaschy
RichardStaschy

1 year ago
hehe... Dragon's Nest is PG... 

I'm also been asked several times about a part 2 or something based on Steve (the Unicorn)... 

You should check out some of these teen stories the content is quite strong, although most are a train wreck and sucks total ass... but there is a few that are quite good and if you make some good replies on their stoires they may return a favor (or others will be looking at your stuff).

I've posted a nice reply on a crapy vampire story on booksie and my reply picked up some good readers... you should check out my booksie account :)
@RichardStanschy

Hahahahah, you made me cough from laughing so hard.

I guess I have to choose between pride or viewers :)
RichardStaschy
RichardStaschy

1 year ago
Another suggestion... change your categories to vampire romance... then add a few 'more' key words and maybe a hot cast. 
@RichardStaschy

Good God no, Vamps is supposed to be R rated for a reason. :)

Valley will be more subdued

I was gonna start a new novel a G rated one about a dragon, no relation to your story just something I came up with over the weekend, but I'm having a hard time working out the details right now.
RichardStaschy
RichardStaschy

1 year ago
Sorry, I'm not sure on the spamming department... I'm quite please that Dragon's Nest took off like wildfire... Lifelines is the same, like Vamp... these stories are focused towards 'adult readers' most of the readers are between the ages of 13 to 17... 

If you want to pick up reads on vamp you can try to spam it... Maybe, read a few teen sf stories... (it gives you a good ideal on what they are looking for) I did some 'homework' before writing Dragon's Nest... :)
@RichardStaschy 

Yea I was supposed to work on Valley over the weekend but say la v.
Hopefully this week. The reads on vamps have slowed to a crawl, I cant help but feel that sci fi on this website isnt as strong as the other types not to mention with a name like vamps people write it off as just another vampire story probably. Thanks for commenting and voting. :)

Craig changed his mind about posting it and I probably will just will take me some time to find a format I like.

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