Pokemonmaster100

Just published the first chapter to my rewrite of Bayonetta 3.  I loved the story of the original, but I admit that there are plenty of things to be fixed, so I wanted to try my hand at doing that. 
          	
          	I didn't change much for this first one, but let me know what you think and give me any suggestions for how to improve.

Pokemonmaster100

Just published the first chapter to my rewrite of Bayonetta 3.  I loved the story of the original, but I admit that there are plenty of things to be fixed, so I wanted to try my hand at doing that. 
          
          I didn't change much for this first one, but let me know what you think and give me any suggestions for how to improve.