I would recommend using grammarly or double checking your work before you publish. Also maybe try to be a bit more descriptive and elongate your chapters. Like, in the restaurant, what conversation were they having that led to them confessing or when pidge walked in on them what exactly was they conversation they had together and when they were putting their clothes on, did lance and Keith have a conversation or mumble a few words about the predicament at hand? That's all I really have to say I guess but otherwise good work!