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ParadiseMaiden

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Member Since May 03, 2012
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I'll start as a reader. 
I'm only the average kind of girl who turned out to click this website with out any doubt or interest of what i might be entering through. 
Actually, i have already started reading a year ago. all i have read was about the usual cliche stuff, which kind of made me have mixed emotions. and i'm sorry to say it was also quite annoying.
why?
because it felt like i was reading the exact same plot which made it very predictable. 
Like, oh my gosh my best friend has a huge crush on me, blah blah etc. like waddup? 
all those mushy sentimental thingy got creeps all over me.
just when Stephanie Meyer started her huge shot with the Twilight saga and L.J. Smith with The Vampire diaries, everyone started making a plot about vampires, werewolves and lame creatures.
I'm a critique.
Only at fourteen.
i respect your own stories.
but i should say what my mind shouts. 
and this is what it shouts,

NO MORE CLICHE, there are no gems on those stories. 
Imaginative stories are what this was made for. 
widen your imagination and start drafting, pause for a while find your editor and make me proud with your stories.
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RussianNinja
RussianNinja

8 months ago
Hi I am just a random person, looking for fans so don't mind me.
missdominatrix
missdominatrix

9 months ago
Hi. I'm not good in English, mind helping me with something? :(
ParadiseMaiden
ParadiseMaiden

11 months ago
@Starsareshining , thanks. though, i didn't expect that someone would appreciate my way of thinking. :) 
Starsareshining
Starsareshining

11 months ago
I agree with you on the cliche mushy novels--Blegh.It's nice to see another teen girl who doesn't always go for the vampire werewolf love takeoff story thing :)
ForeverZ
ForeverZ

11 months ago
I'd love it if you could give me some advice on my work, see what you think?! I dont really care how harsh it is, it just shows that there is room for improvement and i'll try and make it better :)

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1218795-outcasts ~ Z
ParadiseMaiden
ParadiseMaiden

11 months ago
@liveralonechizm , no prob. :)
liveralonechizm
liveralonechizm

11 months ago
Thanks sa pagvote ng story ko! Much appreciated talaga! ;)
ParadiseMaiden
ParadiseMaiden

11 months ago
haha. you too! XD
Baekhunette
Baekhunette

11 months ago
NICE MEETING YA! XD
StarryKyamii
StarryKyamii

11 months ago
@ParadiseMaiden : Waaa!! Please don't read it xDD I'm going to do a lot of changes :)) Anyway, thank you very much :D

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