Status: God is in you (1 week ago)


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Member Since May 03, 2012
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I'll start as a reader. 
I'm only the average kind of girl who turned out to click this website with out any doubt or interest of what i might be entering through. 
Actually, i have already started reading a year ago. all i have read was about the usual cliche stuff, which kind of made me have mixed emotions. and i'm sorry to say it was also quite annoying.
because it felt like i was reading the exact same plot which made it very predictable. 
Like, oh my gosh my best friend has a huge crush on me, blah blah etc. like waddup? 
all those mushy sentimental thingy got creeps all over me.
just when Stephanie Meyer started her huge shot with the Twilight saga and L.J. Smith with The Vampire diaries, everyone started making a plot about vampires, werewolves and lame creatures.
I'm a critique.
Only at fourteen.
i respect your own stories.
but i should say what my mind shouts. 
and this is what it shouts,

NO MORE CLICHE, there are no gems on those stories. 
Imaginative stories are what this was made for. 
widen your imagination and start drafting, pause for a while find your editor and make me proud with your stories.
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