This is my review for Cruel and Nazalia story.
1. Maganda ang plot story.
2. Medyo nakakalito at masakit sa mata ang mahahabang paragraph. Suggestion: cut the long paragraph into two or three para hindi masyadong mahaba.
3. Some punctuation and grammar were wrong, which is normal since you can writer better next time.
4. Parang mabilis masyado ang kwento o baka ako lang?
5. May mga words and scene na inappropriate and shouldn't have wrote for example the r*pe joke of the Female lead. Second, yong nanonood ng crime shows ang bata pero 4 years old palang. It's disturbing.
(I like the plot and how the author promote it on tiktok!)
