anonymous_pooja

Hi fellow author, 
          
          I am a new author on this platform and I have recently started my very first book on AbhiRa.
          
          I would greatly appreciate it if you can please give it a read and provide your feedback.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/357810822-dastaan-jo-likhun
          
          Any suggestion, feedback and opinion would be greatly appreciated. 
          
          Thanks :)

anonymous_pooja

@Moons_struck Thank you :)
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Moons_struck

@pooja_singh2103 sure dear I will read your story and give feedback
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DeepshikaDas4

The issue of today's serial is like breaking everyone's heart that no one wants to understand Abhimanyu's pain and suffering
          In 6 year leap only Akshara has gone through all the pain
          Now it is seen online that akshara blames abhimanyu and akshara for abhinav's death
          is going to be the mother of his child
            Please write new story I want Abhira to be one again
          But not like this. If akshara is going to be the mother of that abhinav's baby then I don't want to see abhira together.
          I'm not just saying that
          
          akshara that is right abhimanyu wrong
          No its saying abhimanyu is right akshara is wrong. I want hard that the two sides are equal
          I want you to write a new book in which the two are equal
          Their pain and suffering will be equal.
          Neither one will be greater nor one less
          So I want you to make a new book for Avira. In which they are equal. If you are creating a new book, think better than TV
          Be able to highlight these points
          (1) Abhir custody
          (2) abhimanyu won abhir custody
          (3) Akshara sickness
          (4) Abhir missing track
          (5) abhir wish
          (6) Abhimanyu's heartbroken
          (7) Abhimanyu's outburst (akshara, manjari, beda papa ., khairav, shurakha, aarohi, parth, abhinav,)
          (8) Abhinav death
          (9) Akshara heartbroken hearing Abhimanyu's illnesses
          (10) mrs akshara abhinav sharma reality check
          (11) Akshara and Abhimanyu's apologies
          (12) abhira become one again
          please  create a new book and storyIf you create a new book, I will help you write about Abhira

MaryamMalik092

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Moons_struck

@DeepshikaDas4 surely dear I will write a book for you
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RiyaMaji

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Moons_struck

@RiyaMaji Sure dear I will read your story ☺️
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