'I am running. Without thought, without being conscious on my actions. All I know is that I must run to survive. I must get to my people, before it is too late. I must find them, or I will surely die.'
Sometimes it doesn't really make sense, or there's a sentence that doesn't quite fit in, but other than that, I found this to be an AMAZING start.... It's a promise Just something I want to say about the first page; the phrase 'Like him deeper' sounds a little strange. Perhaps you could change it to: 'It made... It's a promise