Mara-Fenn

People who have read Posnidea - opinions please. 
          	
          	When I started writing it, I had a fantastic villain called Trevain. He is the catalyst for the start but once they sail away he kind of drops off and new conflict takes over. My issue is....does he actually fit the story as it's progressed? Is he just a bit surplus? He represents the danger of superstition and non-acceptance but then so does Gwithian. I feel like Trevain just got a bit lost half way through. 
          	
          	So as I re-draft this, my question is, do you want to see more of Trevain if I can find a way to bring his storyline back in alignment towards the end, or do I just tweak the beginning to write him out entirely? Maybe use him in a future book instead? (Not going to lie, I love his character and he is a lot of fun to write because he's just so horrible and I can really go to town on my atmospherics with him, but I want to use him effectively and at the moment I don't think that's happening) 

Mara-Fenn

People who have read Posnidea - opinions please. 
          
          When I started writing it, I had a fantastic villain called Trevain. He is the catalyst for the start but once they sail away he kind of drops off and new conflict takes over. My issue is....does he actually fit the story as it's progressed? Is he just a bit surplus? He represents the danger of superstition and non-acceptance but then so does Gwithian. I feel like Trevain just got a bit lost half way through. 
          
          So as I re-draft this, my question is, do you want to see more of Trevain if I can find a way to bring his storyline back in alignment towards the end, or do I just tweak the beginning to write him out entirely? Maybe use him in a future book instead? (Not going to lie, I love his character and he is a lot of fun to write because he's just so horrible and I can really go to town on my atmospherics with him, but I want to use him effectively and at the moment I don't think that's happening) 

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Mara-Fenn

Anyone else having issues with wattpad randomly deleting page banner images? Every time I edit a chaper the banners disappear when I press publish. 

Mara-Fenn

@acefudge literally nothing, it's just like it was never there. Really weird
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acefudge

@Mara-Fenn I mean wattpad is written
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acefudge

@Mara-Fenn wait is it the photo white background and Watford is written on it? 
            Or litterary totally nothing?
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Mara-Fenn

I'm also publishing some of my little planning shorts for a bit of fun. These are little scenes that are either back story or just things I've used to help me get to know my characters and play with how they interact with the world and each other. 
          
          First up is Kitto, and how he came to join the Anvil in the first place!
          I just published "Kitto Joins the Anvil" of my story "Just for Fun". https://www.wattpad.com/1167124386?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Mara-Fenn&wp_originator=5yJKsZjr4gUn6x5UTXl2DRONrTybFBVtQpkuv8UaQb%2FYI%2B6ItMMQE6aL38%2Fg6DzTqNzOfSv8VPPJ%2FBFhPem2fpx7%2BTK9v4cxSymcpqkYwIVOwaF6GLpvktTWroxeN5k3

Mara-Fenn

The republishing has commenced! Updates will be slow, I'm sitting exams this leave so it's a busy time. But, please check it out and share! 
          
          Posnidea is a character driven, low fantasy, seafaring adventure. When the port town of Port Farno comes under attack, the townsfolk turn to the young female Master, Miven Stormborn to lead them to safety in their long lost homeland. This is a story about self determination, acceptance and above all being true to who you are. 
          
          The Anvil is recruiting new hands, step aboard...adventure awaits!
          I just published "Prologue" of my story "Posnidea". https://www.wattpad.com/1101365083?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Mara-Fenn&wp_originator=ZQXyCibzC98TeScFmCUofSt3dXbZ%2Fefe7tbX4Lkj%2B8%2BLv5fB30cJa%2BY5883qINBQ1vTA6ciMPQ0EW2tDLnJiHeCwNR%2BKzhv%2FfKQIpv6IQ6sZLKi5B2gbAy%2FPskFkbj%2FQ

Mara-Fenn

Hey guys! So I'm finally back from sea, but now busy with exams (it never ends!). I've decided to take Posnidea offline for a bit to get through editing and then completing it...mostly because noone is actually reading it anyway these days and I'm doing some major shuffling about with things. 

Mara-Fenn

Hey guys
          
          Sorry I've been quiet lately. Work has been manic. But I'm alongside for a couple of days now with some sort of spare time so hoping to get the last couple of chapters of Posnidea - uncharted voyage uploaded soon!!