Lovemusic_ami29

@JadeHigginsxox no problem x

Lovemusic_ami29

@djsammysam hi I have read your book. I would like to start off by saying that you're book is good but try not to give away too much in the first chapter for example Chelsea asking Harry about teaching her about love. Maybe you could by perhaps Chelsea getting to know Harry first or them just spending time together and then slowly and gradually Chelsea falling in love without realising it. Just a bit of advice but continue your book it's good

OhMySam_

@Lovemusic_ami29  thanks but the hole teaching of the love isn't the hole thing he thinks he is just twaching her about love but in return she has feelings and dont no what these things are so she keeps to herself .he will take her on dates so she can experience the feel then he starts feeling these things Bu he kniws that he cant becasue he thinks he is just teaching it but thanks for the feedback really enjoyed it but that was somethibg to get people to think that they no how the story is going to go
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