LonelyDauntless

Hi, I'm writing a new story called Mazvier. Until I've completed 4 chapters I won't upload it. However I will give you something to comment on. I will need help something later on. And I will need support. :-)
          	
          	A Mazvier will be the deciding entity of the war to come. The dark or the light. She can choose dark or light. But only in her mind. The male won't have a choice in her decision. It is a wolf and a man who drinks blood. After she has  changed she will have no recollection. She’ll have both men’s blood coursing through her. She'll only know the prophecy and their emotions.

JanluisGeraldez

Hi there! I like your stories, they're very nice. I just wanted to ask how to make a good or nice story? Sorry to bother you but I would be delighted if you'll reply :)

LonelyDauntless

@JanluisGeraldez  thanks. It's weird to here that. But thank you. I'll try to get 2 chapter of my new one up. :)
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JanluisGeraldez

Thank you so much :) you're such an inspiration
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LonelyDauntless

@JanluisGeraldez  3 Mates was written over 6 years ago. I was 14 then. I really need to sort it out. But I write what I want to write to make me happy. If that makes other people happy I'm glad. 
            I'm trying to write a story now. If I can finish it that I'll be happy.
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MidNight_Lover777

Where is the sequel to 3 mates

MidNight_Lover777

@12345Hermionegranger sad but I understand
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MidNight_Lover777

@12345Hermionegranger sad but I understand
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LonelyDauntless

@12345Hermionegranger - I'm not doing it because I want to focus on other stories that I feel like I need to write.
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LonelyDauntless

Hi, I'm writing a new story called Mazvier. Until I've completed 4 chapters I won't upload it. However I will give you something to comment on. I will need help something later on. And I will need support. :-)
          
          A Mazvier will be the deciding entity of the war to come. The dark or the light. She can choose dark or light. But only in her mind. The male won't have a choice in her decision. It is a wolf and a man who drinks blood. After she has  changed she will have no recollection. She’ll have both men’s blood coursing through her. She'll only know the prophecy and their emotions.

LonelyDauntless

I like werewolf stories where it's the the Alpha is possessive and there's the typical cuteness but there's no oomph. The wording and order changes it's just predictable. Like rogues kidnap her, banding together or she's always trying to runaway. The cuteness I love, the predictability, no so much.

YvetteTrevino

Please let me know when then next book come out too my three mates

LonelyDauntless

@YvetteTrevino I'm not doing it. I'm actually thinking of changing it cause a lot of stuff first make sense. As I said on one of the notes I was 14 when I started it and I'm now 18 with different views and thoughts. And 3 mates definitely needed to be changed and in the new version, Luka doesn't exist.
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LonelyDauntless

Hi, I know I've said that I will post new chapters of Three Mates??? And i will be honest that I have been lazy but I will have posted a new chapter 1. Actually tell a lie, I've been trying to find the right words to edit Chapter One. 
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          Lonely Dauntless xx