littlecdraws

I don't think you should make the stories so sexualized because what if a girl that loves dang that's a long name but is a cinnamon roll which in my friend group means innocent and doesn't say anything wrong or dirty wants to read it but then she sees that I'm just telling you this because what if it does happen I mean I'm mature and I've read some of the story and I don't really like it cuz it's too sexualized and has too much sex in it and I don't think that Scott would actually like it I think you'd be weirded out by it and now once he gets to 150 subscribers on Twitch is on the reading Fanfictions and once he sees this one he's going to be weirded out I'm sorry I just want to say that and if you think this is mean it's not supposed to be I'm just telling you what I think okay

littlesundrop

Just finished you're most recent book and woah was that a lot! It was crazy but I'd give a 7/10. Anywho, I think if you're going to write another book what about Lauren x Lizzie? 
          
          And not to be rude but you had a lot of grammar/spelling errors. If you want I can be your editor and edit your chapters. 
          
          Peace!