tigris718

hello, I'm new to this app, but not new to writing, I wrote two large books by hand that are on display in libraries, when I found out about this app, I decided to share my unfinished work on a new book that I've been working on for a year and a half. to some experienced people, to give me some advice on what to change and what to insert into the story and how to finish it before I release it into reality and the world. it is also important to know that the book is dystopian and that the events are very complex and difficult, if you are willing to read it is very long, but the end is definitely not finished yet! thanks in advance if you are in favor of me sharing the story and you giving me advice!