LaurenLuu

If anyone wants to do a comment for comment swap, I'm always free! :) 

RV4601

Hey I am a new writer and I just published my first chapter it would mean so much to me if anyone would read it. It is about a girl named Emily. Emily is tired of her boring life and wishing to die for a long time but she cannot kill herself. One day she sees a dark purple black hole thing in a wall and enters inside it. After this her life took a very sharp turn. She is now on a adventure which is life threatneing and she is unfolding things which she never dreamed of. Thank you.
          

Merrelle_Gopaul

I'm sorrry if thiss upsets anyone.
          Hey guys<3.Im attempting to write a book please give it a try.It would be appreciated sincerely❤.It is called SAVED by OrzalaLee and it is a Mafia romance story.
          Thankksss
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/286899833?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info℘_page=story_details_button℘_uname=OrzalaLee℘_originator=VFjKdN4p3hLRU90PESgGOJxf9iER8kmjG9ZTeovma6NyNCdMVEcGpuGvUiw4kUh8jQGtdpCRO1u5p8eojyxFHpn6w8fyDr54tpA7aGFdxvdx4lnP1wMj25UQy1P6%2FhBi
          

ShShKhan

Hey your book AGENT popped up in my suggestions! I am excited to read it, seems pretty interesting by the description!

LaurenLuu

No problem! :)
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ShShKhan

I will!
            Thanks for the follow! 
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LaurenLuu

I’m glad you’re interested and I hope you enjoy it! :) 
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Madisonone

When do you think you will start posting chapter for Vagrant 2 because I deeply love the your story already, it's fine if it won't be soon, take all the time you need and keep up the amazing work 

LaurenLuu

@Madisonone I hope you enjoy it! :) 
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Madisonone

@Madisonone Oh cool thanks for replying :D <3 oh and idk really maybe some more in depth on characters instead of their surroundings but honestly it's up to you love, it's your book and I CAN'T WAIT!! 
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CeeMTaylor

Hey, thanks for the follow!
          
          If you have any more questions about POV / characterization, feel free to ask away :) I'm not an expert by any means, but I'm always happy to chat about writing.

LaurenLuu

Thank you so much! It was such great advice and I’ll be sure to come to you with any other questions! :) 
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