KingExplosionMurder

Hi everyone I'm new here and I'm  actually working on my first story rn so I'd really appreciate it if I could get a couple of views and some heads ups on what I need to fix or add. (I haven't posted anything tho and will sometime in between the end of May and the beginning of June) It would totally be helpful if I recieved a couple ideas for future reference in my writing tho.