Status: Check out 'Love offenders' my new book, I promise it will be worth you're time ;) (1 year ago)

HeBrokeMyHeart

Name Annalise
Location England
Member Since Jan 14, 2011
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I'm 16 and from England; wooo! I have currently just started college and I am doing 5 courses; oh the joys :( I'm taking English lang & lit A level, Travel & tourism A level, Business Studies A levels, Law BTEC and a Journalism diploma. I hope to get into a magazine or better yet publish one of my novels. 

Random facts about me:
I have a tattoo.
I'm half Hungarian.
I've got the cutest kitten ever! 
I've read over 70 books this year all ready
I'm obsessed with to many people
I'm a huge Harry Potter & Twilight fan & find it hard to decide which movie will be better this year?
I don't have a specific style.

Could people please check out Beyond All Doubt, please? & leave some feedback as it would mean a lot!

Works

The Perfect Love Affair

The Perfect Love Affair

5 parts / 11 pages, updated Oct 19, 2012
R- Rated. When twenty three year old Jane Peterson is accepted at New York editing enterprise her life is literally thrown upside down, she never expected her fir... read more
5,509 reads votes 75 comments 14
His Personal Slave Part 2: Ice

His Personal Slave Part 2: Ice

6 parts / 13 pages, updated Oct 05, 2012PG-13
It’s been a month since they left the bladmir castle – a month since they have turned human. They’re now on the run for survival, with the vampires on their t... read more
4,173 reads votes 44 comments 8
Claimed

Claimed

7 parts / 25 pages, updated Jul 16, 2012PG-13
‘I sensed them before I heard them, dark, strong and ugly. They were dark witches. Adonis holds me against my will as I hear them scream as one by one their slaughtered, I weep be... read more
2,040 reads votes 28 comments 15
His last goodbye

His last goodbye

3 parts / 5 pages, updated Jun 18, 2012
Lauren knew from an early age she was going to die young and she accepted that, death was her course of life. Though when she moves back to her home town she never expect... read more
99 reads votes 6 comments 3
Betrayal

Betrayal

2 parts / 3 pages, updated May 14, 2012
That one stupid night made me lose everything. If only I hadn’t drunk so much I may not have lost my best friend, I may not have fallen in love with her boyfriend. It’s wrong I k... read more
103 reads votes 2 comments 0
Love offenders

Love offenders

12 parts / 15 pages, updated Apr 20, 2012PG-13
A youth offenders is Lily Anderson’s new home. Being committed to a crime she didn’t do she is faced with real criminals and real threats, being weak she is targeted. When ... read more
864 reads votes 45 comments 29
Caster chronicles (book one): Underneath the hidden truth.

Caster chronicles (book one): Underneath the hidden truth.

2 parts / 2 pages, updated Feb 29, 2012
GRAPHIC SCENES OF VIOLENCE OF SEXUAL NATURE; YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. Daniel's whole life has been marked with death, as if he was the grim r... read more
263 reads votes 4 comments 5
His Personal Slave Part 1: Fire

His Personal Slave Part 1: Fire

23 parts / 28 pages, updated Feb 28, 2012RCompleted
Sasha was a normal teenage girl ... until the day she was kidnapped from her home town. Sasha's life all hanged on her decisions ... decisions that could me... read more
88,840 reads votes 622 comments 40
THE PERFECT GUY

THE PERFECT GUY

5 parts / 5 pages, updated Feb 16, 2012
Jo and Allison have always dreamed of the perfect guy and when that guy comes around it turns their friendship upside down. In the fight for the perfect guy, they may lose ... read more
152 reads votes 9 comments 3
Beyond All Doubt (In watty awards 2011!)

Beyond All Doubt (In watty awards 2011!)

26 parts / 29 pages, updated Jan 12, 2012PG-13VideoCompleted
**Trailer included!** What do you do if the world is ending? Run, hide, or go suicidal? What if the world was ending due to an epic war that contamina... read more
10,014 reads votes 189 comments 112

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IthilRin
IthilRin

1 month ago
HEy....I just read the summary of His Personal Slave...and I will definitely read your story. And I have a suggestions for your Book series, maybe you think it's to boring and I'm not really sure if it's going with your other storys...but I would like 'The Vampire Coven' or 'The slave eXPerience'...hope I could help a little ;)
PatriciaJane6
PatriciaJane6

2 months ago
penge po ko soft copies. PLEASE :((
summerbloosom
summerbloosom

6 months ago
I like ur story plZzzzz make more update
KaylaMarieWeiss
KaylaMarieWeiss

7 months ago
You're such a great writing I'm loving your stories! :)
HeBrokeMyHeart
HeBrokeMyHeart

7 months ago
Heya guys! First of all I would just like to apologise for my lack of writing for my books! I know a lot of you have been asking for me to post more on 'The perfect love affair', 'His personal slave part 2' and 'Claimed'! I've been so busy lately with college starting again and working, and dating and dealing with hospital appointments and so fourth. 

Dum, dum, though I can promise you I will be uploading some chapters very soon, most likely more for 'The perfect love affair' as I have loads of ideas for the book! I'm sorry for the lack of work and thought I should owe you guys an explanation! Lastly I would just like to say thank you to everyone who has fanned, voted, commented e.c.t on any of my books it really means a lot!

- HeBrokeMyHeart 
        oxo
HeBrokeMyHeart
HeBrokeMyHeart

10 months ago
@gothicky sorry for the late reply but thank you so much, means a lot!<3
Jewwwwy
Jewwwwy

1 year ago
your books <333 
WattiesUnited
WattiesUnited

1 year ago
@HeBrokeMyHeart Are you ready to open up reviews again?
Vivaladi
Vivaladi

1 year ago
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edibletoxicity
edibletoxicity

1 year ago
@HeBrokeMyHeart oh haha no reason to be sorry! I understand, and haha thats awesome! :P :)

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Is it worthy of publishing or on here? I have re-written 5 or six different versions of this story and have posted them online, there not all...
Claimed

It's up to you if you want to carry on, though I would say to re-read it as i have changed some things such as the kiss between Lily and Daniel,...
Love offenders

Heya, thanks I know it needs a lot of editing this is just the first draft & normaly I would say yes but I'm hoping to become an editor so I need...
Claimed

I feel sorry for her :( This is really good!
Silent Wishes

I really like how you have given her a unusual name as it makes people remember it, good work so far.
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