Larissa

i love your books! i would LOVE to get your opinion on mine! :) <3

Thanks so much!  God bless!

@stellanator
          
          This is a great start. Watch out for those pesky run on sentences though. It's a habit that most writers fall into and I'm giving that out as one of my most popular critiques. That, and the sentence format. Watch how you phrase your sentences, some were a little difficult to follow because they seemed like scattered thoughts.
          
          Good luck and happy writing! 

@Anime_Cartooon_Girl 
          
          Your story definitely has the potential to go somewhere. However, the context is... More on the surface. Try to delve a little deeper. Connect with the characters on a personal level so that the readers can do the same. Great start, just try to broaden the horizons with character creation. 

@Hanella0819 No problem, as long as you keep writing! (:

could you critique my story?  Two Wishes?  Thank you!  God Bless! ><>

@annie0599 It is, but I might do a sequel if I find that more people like my writing. 

@fromyourlips You have no idea how much I needed to hear that. Thank you so much for that amazing support. I seriously needed that boost of confidence in my writing and you gave that to me. I sincerely appreciate it.

You the feelkng you get when it's storming outside, rain splattering against the windows as trees begin to move from their spots. The feeling that being inside makes you feel safe and the cup of tea in your hands make you warm. Know that? I love that feeling. The only thing I miss most of the time is a book that takes me into a world so different to my own. 
          
          That's what your work does to me. It sound really dramatic but I haven't found a book on wattpad that made me feel like that. 
          
          Normally I'm really not that drama queen(;
          
          Hakuna Matata

Is "it all started with a tattoo" done?