Hi Gwendalynong,
Hope I don’t offend but I’m reading your book that’s underediting right now and it’s really good. But I wanted you to know that I read the summary of your other work regarding Diego R. There is one line in the summary that says -paraphrasing “he does not play around with girls”. Now I think I know what you meant, yet it sounds like he doesn’t deal with females. In context I’m sure you meant he likes women not little girls but it’s just worded like he doesn’t like women. Like I said I hope it doesn’t offend; I’m reading that story next. You are a really good writer for being 15. I have a daughter that just turned 16 and she couldn’t write her way out of a cardboard box. Keep writing young lady, you are doing a great job.