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<s>All stories on here are dead. I might revise them at one point when have time.</s>
<b>Whyla</b> 
<li>currently going through revision
<li> possible name change
<li> MC change
<b>The Witch's Chronicle</b>
<li> update at least once a week
****#23 in paranormal at some point****
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    Seoul, South Korea
  • Joined:
    2 years ago

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The Witch's Chronicle

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Description: A decade has passed since the magic community has opened up to human eyes. Even though the government says it had their best interest at heart with each new law enforced, their pleas for a just regime fell on deaf ears. That's where Elizabeth Vetrov...


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Feathery
I see some real potential here. Before I read this chapter, the concept really interested me. This chapter was a bit hard to follow. In the first paragraph it confused me when the MC was talking about two lycans. He goes into a rant about broken or lost equipment so I assumed this was the second one he killed today and not that a secobd had arrived. 

It might also help to cut the paragraphs a bit. Especially with the ones that have dialogue in them. 

Definitely will add this to my library to check out later.