Status: i am drowning in the poetry i asked to critique... I never believed I would get this kind of response. (1 year ago)
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Hey I'm Amanda, I live in California, And I am officially a high school graduate!!! Wooooo!! Hopefully this means I get to do more writing but I have no idea. I do mostly poetry (online at least, I'm not a huge fan of postin my novels online) but I like to write edgy teen fics as well. I also love to critique poetry, so send me links if you would like :) I have been writing since sixth grade and love it. Soooo off I go. Message me, k? :D As it comes to my poetry, I have posted a few different kinds. If its labeled "5 minute poetry," it's one I've written in about 5 minutes, literally. I sat down and wrote the whole thing on the spot. If its labeled "puzzle piece poetry" then I took months to write it because it's made up of several different verses i had written over the course of a few months that fit together. If there's no label then... Well I wrote it but had to put more thought and such into it. So, that's my poetry! I believe all of them are pretty good, I wouldn't hangs a thing about them but critique is more than welcome. Thanks! -Amanda
Works
 | Monsters 1 page, updated Mar 12, 2012  127 reads  11  9 |
 | Touched 1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012  29 reads 2 1 |
 | Electrocution 1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012  38 reads 1 1 |
 | Pill (5 minute poetry) 1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012 57 reads 1 4 |
 | Untitled as of Yet 1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012 44 reads 4 4 |
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MacaelaReising
10 months ago
@DiabolicalxDarling Text me if you still have my number. I want to apologize...
Xx_ReDInK_xX
10 months ago
Thanx ;)
ThurstonHearts
1 year ago
@DiabolicalxDarling Np
DiabolicalxDarl...
1 year ago
@ClaudineVV haha thank you so much XD
ThurstonHearts
1 year ago
@DiabolicalxDarling Well I WANT to read it! XD
DiabolicalxDarl...
1 year ago
@ClaudineVV lol don't even worry about long messages. my critiques often take 2 or three comments because the space is so limited and I look at so many aspects of poetry. and I know, i wish they had more of a library set up where you could flip through the poems or books and pick one just for fun. Because they do, but whenever you go back to it, it's the same poems up. If it would randomize every time that would be great. people can look up anything that way. But that's just me. I don't like thinking that people are going to my work because I asked or because I promised something in return. I want it read because people WANT to read it.
ThurstonHearts
1 year ago
Long message over lol
ThurstonHearts
1 year ago
@DiabolicalxDarling Mmmm I know whar you mean. When I first joined wattpad, I published this storycalled "Acid track" and without even having to advertuse, it got around 700 veiws. But then I left wattpad for like a year, and when I came back I started publishing poems (which I like to write more, and are better at) but it took me forever just to get my book past a 100 veiws. Then I advertised it (which i really didnt want to do) and it shot up. Anyway, i know what you mean its annoying. But Im gonna link you to my fan. You deserve it!!!
DiabolicalxDarl...
1 year ago
@ClaudineVV lol thanks so much XD I don't like advertising my poetry and asking for reads, it's a pride thing because if this were a library or a store, my poetry wouldn't have someone standing next to it telling you to read it... but i kinda had to suck it up and ask. thank you so much for looking at it! I'm trying to get more publicity by doing poetry critiques and getting out there but it's not doing much, thank you so so so so so much!!
ThurstonHearts
1 year ago
@DiabolicalxDarling Where have your poem been all my life! XD
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@challenge647 haha I wasn't holding back, that was my stress. all of it. I just had to write it quickly. I wrote it on my way to my ROP site (I...Pill (5 minute poetry)
part 2! vocabulary... yeah... only 1 question, and that is about "chameleon". WHY did you use that word? it doesn't properly work with the line...
When the heart cease to beat
well hello there ;) lol i'm here to critique, like I said I would be. just a warning, I spam... because my critiques take up a couple comments....
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