Status: i am drowning in the poetry i asked to critique... I never believed I would get this kind of response. (2 years ago)

DiabolicalxDarling

Location Livermore, California
Member Since Mar 03, 2012
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Hey I'm Amanda, I live in California, And I am officially a high school graduate!!! Wooooo!! Hopefully this means I get to do more writing but I have no idea. I do mostly poetry (online at least, I'm not a huge fan of postin my novels online) but I like to write edgy teen fics as well. I also love to critique poetry, so send me  links if you would like :) I have been writing since sixth grade and love it. Soooo off I go. Message me, k? :D

As it comes to my poetry, I have posted a few different kinds. If its labeled "5 minute poetry," it's one I've written in about 5 minutes, literally. I sat down and wrote the whole thing on the spot. If its labeled "puzzle piece poetry" then I took months to write it because it's made up of several different verses i had written over the course of a few months that fit together. If there's no label then... Well I wrote it but had to put more thought and such into it. So, that's my poetry! I believe all of them are pretty good, I wouldn't hangs a thing about them but critique is more than welcome. Thanks!

-Amanda

Works

Monsters

Monsters

1 page, updated Mar 12, 2012PG
140 reads votes 11 comments 9
Touched

Touched

1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012PG-13
36 reads votes 2 comments 1
Electrocution

Electrocution

1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012G
48 reads votes 1 comments 1
Pill (5 minute poetry)

Pill (5 minute poetry)

1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012PG-13
69 reads votes 1 comments 4
Untitled as of Yet

Untitled as of Yet

1 page, updated Mar 03, 2012PG-13
55 reads votes 4 comments 4

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