This is an Adventure time Fanfiction that I originally posted on Fanfiction.net (more details about that inside) so the Ice King decided to have a son but he can't get a princess to impregnant so he makes one
Drew has lived on his own island for about 2 years now with no problems. But what happens when one of his mortal enemy turns up asking for help. The girl seems to have a weird sense to her but her can't put his finger on it.
Fans and fannettes who would like the book "Don't Piss Off Death" to continue I you would like for it to be continue please go to the last chapter of the story and comment
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for fanning back! Did i mention thank you? Thanks! Here have a cookie with milk *gives cookie and a glass of milk* xD ~Aria
Hello wonderful, followers now I'm aware most don't tend to be able to read my books so I have written a new and improved book that you guy will get the third revised copy of. The second revised copy will be posted on Fanfiction so if you want faster updates and short chapters go their of you want longer chapters and you will have longer updates.
I'm considering writing another book that I will finish this time because I have forgotten the storyline I had for DPOD so I can't continue
@LadyOfTheNight hmm wasn't expecting a comment on my story i kinda stopped writing it
ahhh damn it ... wattpad has some kind of problem so i ca't comment on your story ... but i started reading it and... well it's kinda difficult ... the idea behind your story is really awesome, but (yeah this is the big "but" that everyone fears^^) .. but because of the grammar and not using ..how's it called ? graphical characters ??? .. well, i'm sure you know what i mean .... and because you don't use all that it's really difficult to read ... i'm sure you have the "know how" inside of you is an awesome creative writer .. just let him out ...so what i want to say with that is:
-write correct and complete sentences
- use graphic characters
- use stylistic devices
if you do that, than your story has a great potential ... but as it is now, even i have difficulties reading...there is no stop; no break in your story... and because you don't write in sentences the reader never really knows who's actually talking and ... well ... have you caught my point ??
but as i said at the beginning: the idea of the story is really good and you should definitely not give up ... keep writing =)
Problem with the outcast and i deleted it since i kinda miss half of two chapters and i dont have any o0f the chapters on back up so icant rewrite it sorry :(
Hey can everyone check out my new book be appreciated
hey poisted new story thats the new outcast it will be a similar storyline but with more detail and will have a few tweaks added to make it better